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Writing Theory (Part 1): The Story

In a series of articles starting today, our Chief Editor Ella analyses the main principles of creative writing

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So, you are a writer…That means that you, just like me, are part of that broad, eccentric category of people called ‘artists’. Welcome!

Let’s make two things clear from the very beginning:

  1. You have a special talent that not many have, which is staring at the void and see and hear, but not in a serial killer way; and
  2. You have no idea how you are doing what you are doing, even less if you are doing it decently or, heavens help us, well.

Being a writer means sitting in front of a blank page and not seeing the blank page at all. For you, and me, and any other just like us, it’s like a cinema screen: when the lights go out, the film start to reel and the magic begins.

How we do that, we will never know. It just happens, like it happens that a kid is able to kick a ball or solve complex math problems without blinking an eye. But talent without discipline is nothing. Just because you are able to see a story on a blank page it doesn’t mean you will actually be able to put that story on the blank page, even less that you will do so in a way comprehensible to others.

If we have to break down the act of writing to its components, we can say that writing is a bunch of basic rules, a lot of polishing and a ton of reading. To be a good writer you have to be, first and foremost, an exceptional reader. There are no two ways around it. What you read doesn’t matter: there is plenty to learn from different reads, even instruction manuals and comics.

But before we discuss point of views, grammar or the importance of being consistent with verb tenses, let’s talk about the most important thing of all: the story.

What is a story? And why does it deserve to be told?

A story is an ordered sequence of events, put together in the best possible way according to a set of rules we all agree on. It has a beginning, a development and an end. However, given essays or newspaper articles are also an ordered sequence of events with a beginning, a devolvement and an end, why are they not a story?

The key is the concept of transformation: the events in a story ordered in a sequence that underlines the transformation of one into another: we begin with a stable situation, its equilibrium is disturbed and this disruption sets into motion a series of actions that, eventually, will lead to a new stable situation.

To make a story something more than just a sequence of events, you need the plot, which is nothing more than a crafted plan of the events you want to tell.

Christopher Booker (irony!) has actually written an amazing book about it called The Seven Basic Plots. It’s a terrific read and I suggest you get a copy too and keep it on your shelf, between Syd Field’s Screenplay and the Oxford English Dictionary. The basic principle is that no matter what the story is about, there are no more than seven types of plot and every story you tell can be traced back to one of them. It’s true, and it has been true since before the first Greek authors put pen on paper to transcribe what, up to then, had only been transmitted orally. This, though, doesn’t stop the publishing of new books, as it doesn’t stop readers from reading them. 

And this leads us to answer the question: why do we write a story if there are already so many out there and we stand no chance of writing something completely unheard of?

Because even if the plots are only seven, there is nothing out there like what we are writing and this distinctiveness is given by ourselves, by the experiences we lived and by the unique way we see the world. There will always be space for a new story. So don’t be afraid of not being original, because plot-wise you won’t be. But the way you will tell others how your characters met and what they had to overcome in order to have their happily ever after doesn’t exist yet. Happy Writing!

The Seven Basic Plots: An Overview

# 1: OVERCOMING THE MONSTER

A “good” main character and an evil villain that is threatening to destroy the main character or the place where they live. The main character will do all they can to avoid it.

# 2: RAGS TO RICHES

The main character starts their life as a poor, desperate soul. Throughout the narration, they gain power, wealth or a mate, will end up losing it all but getting it back and growing as a person.

# 3: THE QUEST

The protagonist, usually accompanied by a mate or a team, is set out to acquire a specific object or go to a specific place. Along the way, though, they will be tempted and diverted.

# 4: VOYAGE AND RETURN

The main character usually find themselves a stranger in a strange land. After overcoming a series of threats and difficult situations, they will make it back, enriched with a new wisdom.

# 5: COMEDY

A light and cheerful character triumphs over adverse circumstances, conflict becomes more and more confusing, since they will get themselves into bigger problems while trying to solve the previous one, but the result is a happy ending.

# 6: TRAGEDY

The main character is a hero with a major flaw, which in the end will be their ruin and cause of great pity for their fall.

# 7: REBIRTH

An unexpected event forces the main character to go out their usual path, or change the way they live their life, until they understand the source of their mistake, change their behaviour after learning an important lesson, and carry on living as better people.

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Girl Island

The award-winning, edge of your seat debut novel by Kate Castle

Girl Island. Dark Horse, 2021.

Ever wished you could leave everything behind and move to a tropical island in the middle of a distant ocean? What you are about to read may make you change your mind.

When Ellery Holmes left her family farm behind in the pursuit of a better future, little did she know her life would change forever.

Defined as “a cross between Lord of the Flies and Mean Girls”, Girl Island tells the story of 17 years old Ellery who, following the death of her father, is awarded a scholarship to a renowned private school thanks to her impressive achievements in the heptathlon. Before she knows it, she is on her way to the Maldives to attend a sports camp. Travelling with her, a diverse group of seven teenagers she’s never met before, except for her ex best friend, who she’s tied to by a painful past. 

While travelling, the group is forced to make a crash landing into the ocean and end up on a small, uninhabited island in the middle of nowhere. The two boys in the pack soon depart to explore a nearby island in the hope to get help, leaving six girls and their seriously ill teacher to fight for survival. Already rocky relationships quickly turn sour as food and water are hard to come by, and fire becomes the most precious resource to survive.

As a consequence, two factions form, and a nasty, deadly battle commences. Who will be victorious? And most importantly: will the group ever be able to leave the island?

Girl Island is a real page turner. Castle shows a great ability to describe the island itself and the numerous challenges of life in the wild, by creating a vivid and compelling narration that makes you think you are on those sandy beaches, watching the story as it unfolds. 

As unrealistic as circumstances and setting may seem – the initial chapters of the book may in fact cause you to raise an eyebrow – Kate Castle gradually draws you in more and more, turning what could be initially thought of as a “battle royale for survival” novel into a coming of age one. 

Ellery Holmes is, in fact, an impressive, memorable main character, a strong-minded girl that despite her young age and the challenges life has already thrown at her, manages to stay true to herself, overcome the initial insecurity and self-doubt typical of a teenager and puts up a relentless fight to lead and protect her pack. There are losses along the way, of course, but this experience will make her even stronger and end up changing her life forever, as she discovers who she really is. 

Whilst some elements of the narration seem a bit far-fetched – such as two teenagers successfully landing a crashing plane and ensuring everyone survives – they all make sense in the economy of the story. Far-fetched and unrealistic don’t matter as much after all: the struggle is real. Take the eight teenagers off the island and throw them into a real-life setting, a school for example. They would be facing the same insecurities, preconceptions and even peer cruelty and bullying (unless they are on the right side of the fence, i.e. “popular”).

Girl Island is available to purchase at: https://tinyurl.com/22wpdw6w

While I don’t think Castle intentionally set out to criticise a social system that sometimes puts too much pressure on young people to fit in and be liked, Girl Island takes you back to when you were younger and makes you think about all those times you just wished to be like anybody else. Except you were not. This is the power of Castle’s storytelling.

About Kate Castle

Kate Castle is the author of the Amazon.com bestselling novella ‘Born of the Sea’ (available on Amazon). Her debut novel Girl Island – a contemporary YA adventure – was published in December 2021 and has won two awards at this year’s Goldie Awards (Best Debut Novel & Best Young Adult Fiction).

Kate’s books fall into the Young Adult and New Adult adventure and romance categories. Kate is passionate about representing young queer females in literature and writes about fierce, independent young women – the kind of characters she wished she could have read more about growing up (source: amazon.co.uk).


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How to choose the right publishing platform in 2022

Ready to publish your book but still unsure about the right platform for you? No problem! Here’s 10 Publishing Platforms you should consider today.

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The world of self-publishing, especially if you’re at the start of your journey, can be daunting. For this reason, we thought we should kick things off by researching the most popular publishing platforms, so you don’t have to.

We’ve created a list of 10 Book Publishing Platforms including a short description, pricing, distribution channels and marketing support available to writers. Essential, straight to the point and timely, just how we like it.

# 1: AMAZON KDP

  • What it is | Amazon.com’s e-book self-publishing platform 
  • Pricing | Free for ebooks (print books on demand, costs subtracted from royalties)
  • Distribution | Amazon websites (expanded distribution available, subject to distributors’ requirements) 
  • Marketing | Free to use tools: Kindle countdown deals, free book promotion (offer book for free, up to 5 days) Amazon author page, Amazon adverts, book gifting and sample chapters

Website: https://kdp.amazon.com/en_US/

# 2: BARNES & NOBLE PRESS

  • What it is | Independent platform powered by book retail giant Barnes&Noble
  • Pricing | Ebooks free; Print books depending on book specs
  • Distribution | Own website and NOOK devices (own brand ebook readers)
  • Marketing | Free online promotion on monthly themed collections and newsletter; paid for marketing consultations available with partner ScoreIt! (from $69)

Website: https://press.barnesandnoble.com

# 3: INGRAM SPARK

  • What it is | Independent platform for indie authors/publishers to create both print books and e-books
  • Pricing | Ebook + print book: $49; Ebooks: $25 per title & Print books: $49 per title
  • Distribution | Access to 40,000+ independent/online/chain stores & ebook retailers
  • Marketing | No direct marketing but free writer resources available (marketing activity worksheets/checklists)

Website: https://www.ingramspark.com

# 4: KOBO (KOBO WRITING LIFE)

  • What it is | Portal for authors/publishers to create and upload eBooks to Kobo
  • Pricing | Free to use
  • Distribution | Kobo Writing Life (powered by Rakuten Kobo, leading ebook retailer)
  • Marketing | Free writer resources, bespoke promotional opportunities picked by Kobo’s merchandisers, Kobo affiliate program, “How To” guides

Website: https://kobowritinglife.com

# 5: APPLE BOOKS FOR AUTHORS

  • What it is | Portal with support resources from how to write a book to marketing (you must be an “iTunes Creator” account holder)
  • Pricing | Free to use if self-publishing directly or paid for services (at variable cost) through Apple’s 15+ selected partners
  • Distribution | Apple Books portal for direct sale
  • Marketing | No direct marketing support but detailed “How To” guides available

Website: https://authors.apple.com

# 6: LULU

  • What it is | Online print-on-demand, self-publishing, and distribution platform
  • Pricing | Ebooks: free; Print books: depending on requirements
  • Distribution | Lulu Bookstore & major online retailers (Lulu Global Dist. Service)
  • Marketing | No marketing support

Website: https://www.lulu.com

# 7: PUBLISHDRIVE

  • What it is | Ebook/audio-book/print-on-demand aggregator 
  • Pricing | 5 packs, starter ($99.99/year, 2 books) to pro ($999.99/year, 48 books)
  • Distribution | 20+channels, 400+ stores, & thousands of digital libraries worldwide
  • Marketing | Support to get books featured on book promotion sites/newsletters (included in sign-up fee), price promotions, free copies distribution for review

Website: https://publishdrive.com

# 8: SMASHWORDS

  • What it is | Ebook publishing and distribution platform
  • Pricing | Free to get started, ebooks only
  • Distribution | 20+ major online retailers (only for books on their Premium Catalog)
  • Marketing | No direct marketing support but free sales & marketing tools (available when selling directly on Smashwords Store)

Website: https://www.smashwords.com

# 9: BOOKBABY

  • What it is | Book publishing service provider for self-published authors
  • Pricing | Ebooks: $148 no distribution/$348 with distribution; Print books: from $148 (pricing based on a 250 page book)
  • Distribution | Bookbaby’s ebook retail network (50+ platforms, $299 to start); Print books: printed to order only (from $399, 25 books minimum)
  • Marketing | Available for a fee, price from $100 to $399 depending on service

Website: https://www.bookbaby.com

# 10: PUBLISHINGPUSH

  • What it is | UK based self-publishing company
  • Pricing | Depending on requirements (2021 benchmark: complete publishing package from  £1,890 for paperback, hardback, e-book)
  • Distribution | Access to a global distribution network of 40,000 retailers & libraries 
  • Marketing | Active social media promotion (40,000 followers across Instagram, FB, Twitter), book marketing courses coming soon (May 2022)

Website: https://publishingpush.com

Would you like to find out more about any of these? We can help! Just drop us a message at: notforvanity@gmail.com